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yesterday
and again today
asleep at noon
©2009-2010 ~SOLARTS
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HAIKU CHAIN GANG CHALLENGE [link]

Response to McDermid's poem here: [link]

Please reply to this poem in haiku form and let me know when (or if) you do. Post it as a deviation and let people know you want them to respond in turn. Also, put a link to this journal to let people know where to go if they want to see all the chains that have taken off: [link]

All the various chains and links are included here, along with the general outline of what a Haiku Chain Gang is.

RULES:
1. Reply to this poem in haiku form.
2. Then post the poem as a new deviation. Name it whatever you want, or name it according to the system explained in the journal: [link]
3. Make sure to put a link to the poem you are responding to in the Artist Comments too.
3. Then leave a comment and link for the poem you are responding too so that they can add it to their Artists Comments.
4. Then wait to see more poems arrive and add them to the Artists Comments.
5. And so on.

Happy posting!!!

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:iconthetaoofchaos:
*thetaoofchaos Jul 4, 2009, 11:43:30 AM
:heart: this

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The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


joy is a height best measured from the depths
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~SOLARTS Jul 4, 2009, 4:53:25 PM
:)

Thanks man!! So glad.

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"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
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*Djoseph Jul 4, 2009, 5:59:07 AM
Same here buddy. And I who was so proud of my newfound rhythm. Oh how fast it returned to normal...

--
ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA

R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008

"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
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~SOLARTS Jul 4, 2009, 6:00:20 AM
Me too - I was all getting up early and shit when I was working, and now I am break it is back to my old habits.

:)

--
"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
:icondjoseph:
*Djoseph Jul 4, 2009, 6:59:22 AM
I blame the sun that does not go down here. I take a look at the time, thinking it's around 19:00 only to realise it's 02:00 something. =P

I kinda like getting up early at times, though I want to be alone awake since my morning mood is a lonely one.

--
ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA

R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008

"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
:iconsolarts:
~SOLARTS Jul 5, 2009, 12:05:34 AM
Woah - a sun that doesn't go down. Full on. I don't know if I could handle that.

--
"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
:icondjoseph:
*Djoseph Jul 5, 2009, 2:36:07 AM
I grew up with light summer nights so I'm used to it not getting that dark at night, but seeing the sun as high at midnight as at noon (not zenith though) is quite a new thing for me. :O_o:
I don't feel like I need as much sleep in the summer though. If I hadn't already done a haiku about it one new addition to the haikuthon could be:

noon
at midnight
Murmansk

but that would feel like repeating myself.

--
ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA

R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008

"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
:iconsolarts:
~SOLARTS Jul 6, 2009, 7:47:05 PM
I can imagine - that would freak me out!!!

Yeah, it is a little repetitive. But I think that there would be many ways to explore that image, and I think that a haiku poet often needs to explore an image many times to see what else is in it.

:)

--
"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
:icondjoseph:
*Djoseph Jul 7, 2009, 1:54:16 AM
Well, I certainly get many chances to explore that picture here. ;)

--
ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA

R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008

"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
:iconsolarts:
~SOLARTS Jul 7, 2009, 4:42:08 PM
:)

--
"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
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