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summer arrives
even the fruitflies
I consider friends
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moth
caught in the lampshade–
free jazz solo
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midnight
still
cicada trill
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summer arrives
even the fruitflies
I consider friends
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moth
caught in the lampshade–
free jazz solo
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midnight
still
cicada trill
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Literature
notesleep
playing my emphases like harp strings
your voice smokes thru the oaken bramble
pour a carbonated apology, a sun-stained
mile marked envelope, two ill-fitted birds,
hands small holes right before a rush of river
what it feels like being swallowed from the outside
crushing rings into truth serum, pretend
to be out of tune with that deception
I have been unable to parse my own persona
a pink cotton voice I remember thru the phone
I remember because it formed me into a granary
one crop after another of patriarchal idioms
whisper my secrets so softly into a glint of red hair
a saucer-eyed lace pattern cut into pine paper
I practice radical self lo
Literature
Nocte
Hiding from the beast,
From tree to tree,
Running in the dark,
I tell myself such things,
Slow- so it won't find you,
Breath.
These fires have scorched far and wide,
Leaving the scent of my former cinders to linger in my head,
Like some bad bender,
Warped memories encircling grey,
The ground is made of shattered glass,
Broken dreams.
No lilies remain,
To any kingdom I run,
In mirrors of liquid glass,
Surrealist battles are won,
And like fear,
The spider crawled from my mouth.
They are sedating everything,
Brush pixilated,
Focus changing,
Leaving me to run in the dark,
Caught in the eye of the storm,
Hiding in the calm.
Literature
A Haiku
Light well past Midnight
full moon glow, lamp post bright, or
Netflix Marathon
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Some great ones here. I enjoyed ragtime step, and several others. My favorite was the Basho reference. My favorite translation rendered the last line in Basho as "Plop!", which actually works well with your onomatopoeia.
I read through all of the notes, and found a few that I missed, so I went back through again. There is one lingering detail that bugs me, so I wanted to run it by you:
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallow's sound
I got that it was intended to be a double meaning on the first read, and the attribution in the note seems to confirm that that was indeed your intention. I think that the apostrophe s in 'swallow's sound' somehow suppresses the second possible meaning for me. Would it retain your meaning and/or strengthen the double meaning to have read one of the following ways:
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallow sounds
or
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallows sound
The second would give the reader a second meaning of 'sound' to go with the second possible meaning of 'swallows'. Sound as a verb like 'sound off'. That was the only one that felt imperfect to me in the long set, which shows a great deal of refinement and care in these poems. Thanks for these.
I read through all of the notes, and found a few that I missed, so I went back through again. There is one lingering detail that bugs me, so I wanted to run it by you:
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallow's sound
I got that it was intended to be a double meaning on the first read, and the attribution in the note seems to confirm that that was indeed your intention. I think that the apostrophe s in 'swallow's sound' somehow suppresses the second possible meaning for me. Would it retain your meaning and/or strengthen the double meaning to have read one of the following ways:
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallow sounds
or
from within
the Buddha's throat
swallows sound
The second would give the reader a second meaning of 'sound' to go with the second possible meaning of 'swallows'. Sound as a verb like 'sound off'. That was the only one that felt imperfect to me in the long set, which shows a great deal of refinement and care in these poems. Thanks for these.